Excellent chapter! I love Hermione calling him "Pumbles" and feeding him chocolate ... Hermione and Severus holding hands in the tunnel ... Pumblechook discovering shepherd's pie ... so many wonderful details. Looking forward to more.
Finally he's starting to make good use of his Apparition opportunities. I really like what you have done with the idea of comparing fathers and sons. We've all seen the James-Harry comparison, but the one for Severus is an interesting new story line.
As always looking forward to more.
This was a very entertaining read. I particularly liked Bella's parting shot. Nicely done.
2006.04.23 - 12:18PM
I wrote an incredibly long review to this and when i hit 'submit' it refreshed the page and disapeared instead.
basically what i said is that i liked this fic very much, and the voldemort 'scene' reminded me of the play The Pictuers of Patty Hearst based on the famous case of Patty Hearst.